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Portfolio
In a recent project, I leveraged Word's revision tracking feature to enhance an email draft. I refined the content and rephrased it to ensure a professional tone suitable for the workplace. After finalizing the revisions, I shared the updated draft with my supervisor for feedback, along with screenshots documenting the process. This experience highlighted my attention to detail, strong communication skills, and dedication to continuously improving my professional capabilities.
Here is the revised email:
Team Presentation
For this project, we delivered a group presentation in the role of interns who had completed a summer internship, aimed at providing insights and teaching a topic to the incoming class of interns. Our group focused on nonverbal communication in the workplace. The presentation covered key areas, including the definition and importance of nonverbal communication, tips and techniques for effective nonverbal behavior, common mistakes to avoid, and strategies for making observations and responding appropriately.
Feedback
Receiving Feedback
Throughout the business communication course, I actively engaged in giving and receiving feedback on various activities and assignments. The attached documents include feedback, constructive criticism, and advice I provided to a peer on their portfolio and data tracking assignment. I highlighted key areas for improvement, specific tasks to focus on, and additional recommendations to enhance their work.
I also received valuable feedback to help me grow and improve. Whether it was for group presentations or personal projects, I carefully listened to the input, implemented necessary changes, and used the insights to refine my skills and achieve continuous improvement.
Giving Feedback
